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The Intuitive Ending

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Burnt or burned?  Dreamt or dreamed?  Leant or leaned? Smelt or smelled? Leapt or leaped?  Learnt or learned?

I thought I knew, exactly when to use one form over the other and then I found myself questioning it as more and more people gave me their opinion.  Of course, the opinion that I ought to have listened to was my editor’s who insisted that the reading public preferred the author to use one form or the other. 

I have always maintained that there are definite instances when one of these two forms should be used.  For example: the burnt toast went straight in the bin; I burned the toast.  In this instance it is fairly straightforward – adjective vs verb.

But in the case of dreamt/dreamed, leapt/leaped it is not so simple.  In that particular instance I agree that one ought to stick with either one form or the other but within the context of the sentence and the meaning you are trying to convey, or, if context is irrelevant then I tend to select it based on the writing/speech.  If it is old and english then it is dreamt.  If it is modern and americanised then I use dreamed. 

But I have been told that I am incorrect in my thought process and either form can be used.  But, int he case of dreamt/dreamed – I would use the former to use one instance within the dream or the latter if it happened throughout the dream sequence.  For leapt/leaped I would use ‘she leapt in front of the bus’ – the action ends abruptly – or ‘the deer leaped over the car’ – it refers to the constant action.

I’m lucky to work in a school library and I have now looked it up in text books and spoken with English teachers and I can report that there is no one conclusive rule; none of them completely agree with each other on which form is best used in everyday language, and the rules governing its use can be complex, depending on word, situation, language, speech/narrative, etc.  I shall stick with what I know and conclude that if it sounds right, use it.

This, of course is a completely useless conclusion to non-english speakers as they will not have had enough exposure to the spoken language.  Therefore, for them I give this advice: use the -t ending if it refers to a short occurrence (I burnt my arm on the oven), or -ed ending if it took longer (Dad burned the burgers).  On the other hand you could use one form and stick with it, but it wouldn’t have the same impact. 

Should I now talk about while and whilst which do not fall into the same category as the previous examples or have you had enough? 

While I use one form over the other when it sounds right and tend to stick to whilst to mean during, in the more definite cases of although or whereas I switch them accordingly, and I was gratified to find that explanation written down.

You may now deliver your verdict.  In the meantime I now have to go back and re-edit my novel…

Author: Bea Turvey apprentice author and witch

I am a wild-haired author who cannot stop writing. The writing process is not a task for me. It is an extension of myself. When I write I lose myself as easily as if I slipped into the story for a swim. Writing became a serious part of my life in Decmber of 2009. Unless you're reading this in 2014 it wasn't that long ago, and the bug hit me hard and fast. My first novel, Banished, was published in March 2010 and is available at http://www.amazon.co.uk/Banished-ebook/dp/B008PGM4TQ/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1361913026&sr=8-1. If you read it, or anything else I've written, I hope you'll post a review and let me know why you lied it - or even why not!

4 thoughts on “The Intuitive Ending

  1. If You were to ask me, there may be a few things to be added but since you took the initiative for opening this topic I can’t help but admit your sayings.

  2. For modern usage, “around.” I should add that the older forms are also nice if you’re trying for a softer or somewhat poetic effect.

  3. For me, the “t” ending is old fashioned and implies a non-contemporary setting. So it depends where or when the book is set and what impression you want to convey. It has nothing to do with the extent of the action.

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